Bombing in to the lake the boy jumped a long way down to the water.
On top of the high cliff he was taking to God. Powerfully God jumped and twisted and turned in to the lake.
Hello Jadakiss, my name is Toby. I am totally amazed by the fact of how you described exactly what happens, i'm even more amazed by the fact that you actually knew it was God in the short film because when I studied it I had no idea who he was (To be honest I thought he was an ice cream man). I also like the way you used the word powerfully and turned and twisted in your story because it emphasises the text and people like me love that! Next time would you mind if you maybe described more about this story? Because people like me really want to hear it! Keep Up The Good Work!
Hello Jadakiss, my name is Toby.
ReplyDeleteI am totally amazed by the fact of how you described exactly what happens, i'm even more amazed by the fact that you actually knew it was God in the short film because when I studied it I had no idea who he was (To be honest I thought he was an ice cream man). I also like the way you used the word powerfully and turned and twisted in your story because it emphasises the text and people like me love that! Next time would you mind if you maybe described more about this story? Because people like me really want to hear it!
Keep Up The Good Work!
Kind Regards,
Toby